Nice first draft, although I'd be wary of those exclamation marks if I were you!
Good for you. Now get someone to cut the tree down and make it into a wardrobe!
Cheers guys!John, what exclamation marks?!? ;) !!
You can't see the exclamation marks?! Your story is haunted! Haunted I tell you!
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